by Ashson
He never asked consent, so this is the same rape-culture bullshit that Trump & Cosby pull. It's not seduction, it's not sexy, it's criminal!
Lost me at the first parahraph whete you described your protagonist by slut-shaming her. You're a dude so write about a male protahonist
It's fucking obvious that you have no idea of what makes a woman. Yuck! Your story is garbage.
Shame you either don't know how to read your pathetic comment or you're incapable of proof reading before Posting!
So... First of all I quite enjoyed it. It was in the reluctance/none consent categorie... So if it is a depiction of rape its fantasy and clearly not intended to be the writers view on how male/female sexual relationships should necessarily play out you wouldn't go to the bdsm section and throw a tantrum because someone used handcuffs and a whip.
It would be nice to see a longer-term relationship develop out of this coupling. It would give you something deeper to explore, and the emotional connection would be interesting and engaging for the rest of us. Sex is not just physical, as we know....