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Wonderful job!
I've always been an avid reader of fantasy/sci-fi, and this submission was in my opinion, quite well worth the read. Have you considered expanding on the idea/worldset and writing a novel? You have a lot of talent, and I would enjoy being able to go down to the local book store and see your work for sale there.
American Idol
You are my american idol in literotica. The best of the best. I just love it.
Brilliant Triology
Brilliant triology - can't wait for (if) you to write a sequel...
Great to see stories which are a good read first, and erotic second...
Damn.
While part of me is pissed you killed off Eric & Bill, (that being the sentimental part), the other part of me understands why you did it. For the plot.
And, to be honest, there are few things I prefer more than a great plot.
And this one was pretty damn good.
(Convoluted as HELL though. ;) )
Hell of a way
To NOT end a story. What of Yamara though?
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