Great job so far and it continues. Thanks this was one of your best chapters so far it really give insight into mom's quandary battling her dual personas. Love the subtle set up for dessert before dinner.
Almost there! Keep going! Thank you!
Long slow build up is nice. Dropping her panties may be a bit abrupt.
Keep it going. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks 5 stars
My only criticism is the chapter was too short.
cmon, don't keep us suspended like this
Another very good chapter. One could see Barbi outfit clearly and easily. Looking forward to.the next chapter. Very well painted.
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Here we go.....
Great job so far and it continues. Thanks this was one of your best chapters so far it really give insight into mom's quandary battling her dual personas. Love the subtle set up for dessert before dinner.
Getting better!
Almost there! Keep going! Thank you!
5 stars
Long slow build up is nice. Dropping her panties may be a bit abrupt.
Great story
Keep it going. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks 5 stars
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My only criticism is the chapter was too short.
now we getting somewhere
cmon, don't keep us suspended like this
Wonderful
Another very good chapter. One could see Barbi outfit clearly and easily. Looking forward to.the next chapter. Very well painted.
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