Hi PE.I love the start of your story and look forwrd to the next chapter.I have always envisaged my wife in the same scenario and it would be nice to find that the wife isn't too perfect and more real.
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Anonymous05/21/04
Here we go again
another wimp husband story to add to the 3 million others here on Literotica.
What about something a bit original?
Just another cheating wife story that sounds like a porn movie plot. Not very creative.
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Anonymous05/21/04
Good start
Ignor your detractors. This is a good first chapter and I look forward to more. My wife and I role play in a similar fashion (and no, I am not a whimpy husband but rather a former cop with an open mind) and this transition from fantasy to reality is really the crux of the matter.
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Anonymous05/21/04
What an original idea
What a novel idea...a husband wanting his wife to be intimate with another man. Gee, that hasn't been done here before. I wonder what's next...hiding in the closet to watch, perhaps? No doubt the husband will soon experience his first creampie. I wonder why no one has written anything like this before.
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Anonymous05/21/04
Good Writing!
Don't pay any attention to the complainers. They don't have to read it. I thought your story had lots of tension at the end. It certainly provided plenty of room for the imagination as to her feelings as she dressed. Same for her husband and the emotion he must have been experiencing knowing she was probably going to go through with it. Thanks!
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Anonymous05/21/04
Fellow contributors as judges ?
Well, manny couple, how many another cheating wife stories that sound like a porn movie plot did you write by yourself ? And how creative is your rating ?
I love my husband so much that I want to fuck someone else or I love my wife so much that I want her to fuck someone else. Why doesn't he go out and fuck someone so that he can show his love for her? Now does this story make any sence?
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Anonymous05/23/04
Love It!
Very similar to a real situation my husband and I are in.
I rarely read stories in the "Loving Wives" section because generally I do not like the tone of the stories. This is what the commenters with the snide remarks are really getting at. One of the beauties of Literotica though is that you can pick an choose what you want to read - if you do not like a certain type of story, just don't read that type. Just don't look down on those that may enjoy that type of erotica.
On a positive note, this story has a bit of class to it. While I was initially disappointed at the end of the story as I did not feel fulfilled, I then realized that it was the opening chapter in a potential series. This story is just a set up for future stories - a character and plot introduction so to speak. Hopefully there will be some interesting scenes in the following chapters - I can just see where PowerExchange can take this series.
Please carry on
Hi PE.I love the start of your story and look forwrd to the next chapter.I have always envisaged my wife in the same scenario and it would be nice to find that the wife isn't too perfect and more real.
Here we go again
another wimp husband story to add to the 3 million others here on Literotica.
What about something a bit original?
Another one
Just another cheating wife story that sounds like a porn movie plot. Not very creative.
Good start
Ignor your detractors. This is a good first chapter and I look forward to more. My wife and I role play in a similar fashion (and no, I am not a whimpy husband but rather a former cop with an open mind) and this transition from fantasy to reality is really the crux of the matter.
What an original idea
What a novel idea...a husband wanting his wife to be intimate with another man. Gee, that hasn't been done here before. I wonder what's next...hiding in the closet to watch, perhaps? No doubt the husband will soon experience his first creampie. I wonder why no one has written anything like this before.
Good Writing!
Don't pay any attention to the complainers. They don't have to read it. I thought your story had lots of tension at the end. It certainly provided plenty of room for the imagination as to her feelings as she dressed. Same for her husband and the emotion he must have been experiencing knowing she was probably going to go through with it. Thanks!
Fellow contributors as judges ?
Well, manny couple, how many another cheating wife stories that sound like a porn movie plot did you write by yourself ? And how creative is your rating ?
True love,
I love my husband so much that I want to fuck someone else or I love my wife so much that I want her to fuck someone else. Why doesn't he go out and fuck someone so that he can show his love for her? Now does this story make any sence?
Love It!
Very similar to a real situation my husband and I are in.
Come on guys ...
I rarely read stories in the "Loving Wives" section because generally I do not like the tone of the stories. This is what the commenters with the snide remarks are really getting at. One of the beauties of Literotica though is that you can pick an choose what you want to read - if you do not like a certain type of story, just don't read that type. Just don't look down on those that may enjoy that type of erotica.
On a positive note, this story has a bit of class to it. While I was initially disappointed at the end of the story as I did not feel fulfilled, I then realized that it was the opening chapter in a potential series. This story is just a set up for future stories - a character and plot introduction so to speak. Hopefully there will be some interesting scenes in the following chapters - I can just see where PowerExchange can take this series.
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