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by Anonymous

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by 2knees10/07/16

A fantastic story

I really loved your story and found it seriously great especially for a first attempt. I hope that you write more soon.

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by Anonymous10/10/16

Trying to be gentle...

This wasn't really a story. You just mentioned some random guy then described a bunch of sexual actions in kind of an unarousing manner. Your low rating is because any woman who clicks on this, and there are a lot of them on this site, is going to find this off putting. I know it's your first time. So, I won't vote... but you'll do better if you actually write a story next time. Not everyone on this site is a horny, fourteen year old boy that gets turned on simply because you mentioned tits.

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by youmakemewet10/10/16

Perhaps I should explain...

This story is based on an event from my own life. I wrote it based on how I remember it. I really like stories on here that feel like life. Sometimes things happen to us and its like nothing else matters or even exists or ever existed except that one moment in time. I really was trying to show how meaningless the little school girl crush on the guard was. Thanks for reading.

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by Anonymous10/12/16

Not a story?

There are plenty of posts exactly like this one. It has a beginning, a middle and an end. According to my creative writing professors, that is exactly what a story is. If you want an engaging plot, maybe you should look in the novellas section.

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by BuzzCzar10/12/16

Flash Story

It's a flash story about a sexual encounter. Not bad, especially for a first effort. There are some minor grammar issues but nothing much. Keep working on your writing and thank you.

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by Anonymous_stranger01/13/17

not sure...

...why haters be hatin'! I loved this scenario.

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