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Good beginning
What's happens next? Looking forward to finding out
good start
please continue! i like what you have started.
A yummy start!
I hope that this continues! Thank you!
😀
Lovely story. Hope to see a second part 😀
Great!
Please continue.
Rambling Narrative, But....
Yeah, ...but, ...it gets a 5-star rating from me!
Rambling, wandering thoughts, first-person story ...almost all the things I don't like, yet this one, this author, this writer pulled it off with style and with erotic emotions. I'm impressed.
If I get my way, this story will continue. And please, if you're tempted to change the writing style, please don't. I don't know how you do it, but it's an impressive method of writing (or else you're just good at it and no one else is?).
Keep up the great work,
Yes!!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
By all means, keep going!
I love it
Please keep going
Need More of this
That is so well written and erotic. Keep up the good work.
Bad Girrrll, Bad Girrrlllll
Shame, shame on you for leaving me all up in the air like this.
Please write more
This is just getting good please finish.
finish
Finish this is so good
Finish this. Sooooo good
By all means...
Don't leave us hanging! Yes! We want more!
Why???
Why did you stop at that point? Don't tease us. Lol. Please continue. Pretty please.
Please..
I have never felt so frustrated..please continue writing..
More!
More please.
left hanging
You certainly must finish this.
Yes, this is starting out fantastic!
Please, please, please finish.
finish
you need to finish this asap
Sexy tease
Yes please do continue. How did it feel when she ate you out? Did you do it to her? How did you feel afterwards? Did you see her again?
Great start
You really should write a second chapter.
Tease
Your a tease. Yes, please continue this story with more chapters.
Yes please
Yes please write more! I love hearing stories about someone discovering a new side of there sexuality!
Hot
Kindly write more,the story is awesome.
rwofogu
Im Not logged in now, but, please finish the story
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