All Comments on 'My Ex-Boyfriend's Hot Mom'

As usual this is a great story! Love reading this and all your stories! Thanks for sharing them!

And I know how you are about sequels, but as I have said in the past about your stories. I really love the seduction and romance (yes even in the D/s related stories I love the romance), and would like to see a few more chapters. AND since as you keep repeating in your stories IT IS 2016!!! How about these 2 ladies falling more in love and getting married???? So now, off to tweet this story out to my few followers!

One of the best I've read Chapter 2 must be a must for Sabrina & Jasmine

As no man plugged her, i look forward to her reunion with her roommate!

Mmm this was so good. A great read.

This author is one of Literotica's great assets. Anything she writes is solid, mercurial, informative (I've become a better lover because of her writing) and a hoot! Her story about seducing her 'straight' girl friend is one of this site's great treasurers. I read everything she writes and am a better lover, fiend, and experimenter because of it.

I always read your stories. And I've said that in terms of the submissive/dominant dynamic, you have the best stories because they are so erotic. But THIS, WOW. Your best story yet.

If I wanted to nitpick, I could refer to potential inaccuracy in Sabrina's bra size because if for example, Sabrina is 5'4, 125 lbs, there is no way, she could have a 38 band because rib cage(her band/underbust measurements) would probably be much smaller than that.

As a girl who can attest to this, there are stores with brands of bras that go above a DD. In fact, there is a place in Poland named Ewa Michalak who makes bras has that go up to a O cup in UK sizing. I don't want to go off into a tangent, but just to give you something to think about because I saw how you use Sabrina as the younger woman who is well-endowed and Jasmine as the older woman who isn't as well-endowed.

And the concept of her being Sabrina's ex's mom is so hot. Keep writing your wonderful stories and I love the new story about "Lil Annie" too. Thank you, thank you, thank you for being such a great writer and sharing it here.

No room mate Just Sabrina and Jasmine Hotter and riskier the better (Maybe back in the classroom !)

Amazing story, I agree with the other reviews you are one of the best authors on this site.

this is so much better than your other stories, I really liked the way jake came in and found his former girlfriend with his mother, it will teach jake to love his girlfriend and the A-Z in licking was pretty good as well you should write more stories like this one

So this is how your mom treats you, humiliates her son, yes so he is a jerk but you dont do that to your kid, give this a 1 for another man hater.hopefully he never talks to his mom again.

great writing, and yes another seductive and erotic hit from the best author here. This has potential of another Bree story, which I love, you are amazing. thanks. oh and I hope you win, five stars.

Hope there is more and would love to see the gf become the dom over the milf..I really like those kind of stories that u write..

Another Great Story from an Outstanding Author . As one of the subjects in this story found out , the table can be turned quite quickly .

A question for the author , does Jasper Ave sound Familiar ?

Great story!

A really great story! Thank you!

But technically she still loses her bet with Karen. Jasmine wasn't part of the bet. She didn't get any dick so now Karen should have her chance. Then maybe all three at La Chateau. Lol

This was actually edited by 4 people?

NICE!!!!!!!!!!! WELL DONE, THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!!!

GUNRUNNER

WOW, another great story, Jasmine, it could even be your best, loved the A to Z of eating pussy - inspired. Please continue their tale, this could run and run. More please, pretty please from your greatest British fan.

I usually enjoy your stories, but your main character had no redeeming values whatsoever. What a slutty, whore, filthy languaged **** she is. Stopped reading after page one.

I've read some of your work previously. You are a very talented writer, however I generally stay away from the Dom/Sub and blackmail plots. As a former LEO I have seen such insecurities twisted into submission with tragic and sometimes fatal outcomes. I very much enjoyed this story and your ability to weave the plot to a very erotic and fulfilling event for both ladies. Good luck with the competition!

DRock.

Not up to your usual high level

I have tried to like your work. Honestly. I have no idea why I always find your stories such a turn-off. I've yet to finish a single one. I'm not 100% sure why. This story in particular had me turned off at the thought of the protagonist being so 'used'.

Sorry, but from now on I'll just do myself the honor of bypassing your submissions.

The intitial decsription of the girl was absurd. She loved sex but could not come? What is their to love then.

After that it was like most of your stories: forced dialogue and attempts to be witty that fall flat.

Could have been much better. Your other stories are much better.

Can you please make a story about girl forced to masturbating or like in the story get fisted on the phone with her sister or on skype

...As sweet as you get anyway. It hit the right beats for most stories of it's type, though it was gentler than most "burn the bitch" or "burn the bastard" tales. Since it was anti-men and not really a tale of sexual awakening (the lead character isn't drawn to Jake's mother, she just enjoys the sex more) I wasn't particularly offended at the grenades tossed at my gender. Amusingly, you end making the same argument in here that so many "magic dick" stories press. In this case it was a "magic pussy" (figuratively speaking), but in the end the argument was the same... the protagonist just needed the right experience to turn them to the "right" side, which in this story is lesbianism.

Over all, it's a 3 or 4 star effort, but let's call it 4.

I really hope you plan on continuing this story. I thought this was a 5 star story, as are all of your stories. Jasmine you are the best.

started a little slow but finished with a bang .

Would love to read more as with most of your stories I seem to be wanting more keep up your great work easy worth 5 stars

Please don't :)

This is wonderful as are all your stories I've read.

That was one of the best stories I have ever read! I have read quite a few stories of yours and all of them are FANTASTIC but this one was just the best ever. I hope you wrote more chapters to this story.

Well developed,

Well written!

I just saw this on the Halloween list and thought "Eh, what the heck"-completely unaware that you were the mastermind behind this glorious work! Just goes to show that sometimes trying things at random can be a good idea. Thanks!

If it were possible for a person to change their sex at will, what fun the world would be. We could actually participate in these great stories as we read them, though I admit just reading Jasmine's stories makes me feel like I am part of the story.

The only bad thing about this story, is that it ended! Lol loved it from start to finish and really hope you're planning on doing a sequel or two after it? :D x

Amazing story, but I agree it shouldn't have ended! Hope we can find out how the drive to get more mixer went. :)

Next chapter: Sabrina introduces jasmine to her roommate

Out of the few men I had, very few were bad in bed. Most listened and adjusted to my needs. I just prefer women. Please stop making all lesbians as men haters, and men as dick thinking cum shooters. The sex itself was fun read though.

Great story!

But I was really looking to see the reaction of the roommie, athough I'd forgive you if you write a follow up story.

Anyway, keep writing about whatever, as anithing you write is usually VERY fun to read

My pussy is so wet after this. I came 4 times thanks to you. Best story in so long. Keep up the good work.

This author is in my personal top five of all time! The current story is a classic example of a great story, the mastery of telling it in a most provocative fashion and leaving us with a satisfied mind, sticky under-clothing and a warm and fuzzy glow that will last until....well, you know.....

This is my second or third time reading it, and it is even better now than the first time I read it! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

I find some of your stories to be a little formulaic, but this one stood out as much better than the others.

Would love to read what happens between them and if Sabrina gets with her roommate

I have read most of Silk"s stories and she is such a good writer leaving me erect every story. She is one of my favorite writers.

What a great piece of work this is. All the right emotions at the right time. Loved it got this 83 yr old up and about.

This is begging for a second chapter. Her roommates agreement was if she didn't get filled with a cock. I'm sure her roommates going to get to have fun with her when she gets home.

You are without doubt the best writer here, thus the reason for my title.

I lusted after two teachers to the point of blue balls. Two women making love - so special and sexy. More - please.

Sabrina is a nicely complex character full of contradictions as we all are. Her personality vis-a-vis her body . I love the Sam Kinnison routine incorporated It is a very funny and excellent routine.

Nice twist on the revenge theme. Your writing in this story is right at the top of your work! Thanks!

Great work! Very sexy. A friend's mum also turned me off boys and onto sex with women, so I found this quite believable as well as erotic.

I loved the way it was written.

But, I'd like to know if Sabrina ever gets together with Karen.

As you say. Very good, and I liked her comment to Jake.

I too would like to know if Sabrina and Karen get together and forever .And what Jake has to say about his mom and ex girlfriend getting married. ..

"...he jerked as he arrived back in his brain and finally nodded" - one of the best lines It was nice to read a "softer" story from you - I enjoyed it a lot.

Would also like to have seen how you could have continued it - the characters still have a lot of potential in them (hint, hint ;-)

They should have a 3some with Karen

Indeed, the hottest story I've read. Please keep me cumming.😘

Even by your high standards, this is a great story.

An amazing and erotic story. One of the very best ev ever!! More please!

...in every sense! More please!

Love

Marixxx

I liked your story a lot, but it was not finished. Since Sabrina did not end up getting any "man meat" as she called it, she owed her room mate a night together with her. That could have been the cherry on the cake. Other than that, a very good story.

more pliss

more plisss

Lmao! 10/10

Need sequel

Mrs. Walker is a fucking savage and i love her so much. Great story! Would personally love a sequel, if not, another story focusing on her roommate.

Lovely story of revenge, could be added to possibly?

Another great story involving Jasmine. Would love to see another chapter as they develop their relationship giving Sabrina the confidence and security in her own sexual body that she needs. 5

What happened when she got home to her roommate?

Definitely needs a sequel!

FANTASTIC!!!

WOW, Absolutely wonderful. You are such a talented story teller. Thank You so much for sharing with us. A sequel would be wonderful.

Amanda

Revenge is best served cold but hers was definitely HOT! Loved this tale or should it be tail? Carry on as you have begun.

In your usual deft style, a nice sweet short sexy lovely story.

Hot Great Story RW

Hot Great Story RW

How is this revenge on him? His mom is all up in his ex girlfriend, her used cunt and mouth where he nut all over. He probably enjoyed the fact his mom was having his sloppy in seconds, super kinky. 😘

nice..you always seem to kkep me reading always...keep it up and thax 4 sharing...love your work..

I have enjoyed read many of your enjoyable stories. Thankyou.

I didn't like the use (overuse?) of the bullet point sentences in this one.

It was too disruptive.

Also the double line spaced added to this story being too disjointed.

Maybe younger people who grew up with PowerPoint presentations and texting may be more comfortable with that style, but for this grumpy old wrinkly boomer it was definitely not a plus.

This story needed a longed ending for a solid 5 stars. I rated it a 4.star.

I just slipped into being a part of the greatest generation so I qualify as an old fart. Proper punctuation & correct word usage throughout is a great bonus to me. S. S. L. always comes through on that point.

Although sex scenes were hot, they were to far apart. Could have been shorter.

Bill S.

We teach people how to treat us MC responds positively when disrespected so she gets more of the same from her boyfriend but then suddenly leaves him without communicating to him that this was a deal breaker for her and later says he broke up with her and wants "revenge" for something he probably thought she would be into.

The mom was insane siding with this bitch instead of her son, makes sense now why he was into degrading women and the ending was annoying why didn't he tell her off? I expect unrealistic stories like this to come with incest orgies.

I need this to be continued

another great story with women loving women, different yet why not .thank you !!

Absolutely perfect ending for her ex-bf that cheated on her. Broke her heart, used her, etc. Just a wonderful way to get even with him.

I'd like a story where she gives Karen a chance. (: Unless that already exists?

389. Sweet! Hard to believe she was such a sexual person and changed her victims so quickly, but it was a very hot story. Perhaps her roommate can be next in a sequel. I would like that.

389. This was a real turnaround from her previous persona where she had been a sexual slut. Now she continues being a woman pleasing sexual slut. I wonder, Jasmine, about your sexual persona in that your descriptions are so hot like you really enjoy writing such sexy stuff. I expect that she will continue with her roommate in the future, don’t you?

Fun ending but not the very best.

Bill S.

A revenge story that turns into a sweet story of awakening.

Excellent story.

Wow. I've not anything like that before

Like all your stories this one was hot.

I love how Sabrina got her revenge on the cheating ass who was her bf. I think maybe a nun's habit for next Halloween...

The ABC.... part was a bit long. Otherwise a great story.

Hah! Great departing comment regarding her having an orgasm - classic!

The best thing is that when Sabrina gets back to her apartment she promised her roommate she could have her way with her if she hadn't had a huge cock fuck her. I'm sure Karen will be shocked when she finds out that Sabrina is now happily a lesbian.

What a turn of events Sabrina took Jasmine back to her place and Karen could have her way with Jasmine