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Cold War Pt. 01

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by Anonymous10/07/16

Too short, not enough to hold interest.

Even if there is no sex, this story is too mundane.

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by Anonymous01/22/17

Great!

I'm excited for the next one. It's written well, cute, and I personally appreciate your pairing choice. Zahra is so overlooked. Make sure the tense doesn't change, though.

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