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This is a horrible story-
WRITERS of stories often reveal a lot about their mind-state in their "tales." This one sure does. Controlling, brutal, rape minded&VERY ILLITERATE. No advice from me to use an editor. Instead I implore them to GET HELP-they have a Very DANGEROUS mind set. Too many would be Violent Wackos walking the streets. Don't write here anymore please. Seek help. Icky stuff above. Fiction, yes. From a Dangerous mind. Get Help Soon.
Not Bad
In reference to the comment above"Horrible Story". I didn't find this story horrible but rather a typical wife gang bang story. These stories are sexual fantasies so if you are a prude you have no business in this category and should stay with the romance/couple category. Stop trying to shame someone for their writing.
Great story
I loved it. She was clearly willing. It showed the differences between the men. I loved reading it from the husband's pov. Very hot. Nothing to criticize. As a female, I wanted to read even more!
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