All Comments on 'The Taking of Betty'

by Jay5555

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Good, what happens next?

I liked it but was short. Needs a part two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
The Taking of Betty

I hope that's just part 1 of your taking advantage of a MILF that can't handle her liquor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
taking of betty

I thought the story was good but you should check your spelling more often you had mispelled the word (hair) hear when its hair so look them up in a dictionary if you dont know

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