Congratulations on jumping into the deep end with your first story -- I wish I had written it! Welcome, Guitarseaman, and please bring us more of your work. Five stars!
Appreciate the comments. Have written Chapter 1 of Hurricane Matthew (Incest and Taboo) and will alternate between the two and (smile) take it slow (The best way....isn't it).
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Good start
You've got a good base for another chapter. Please continue, this could get interesting.
A great start!
Congratulations on jumping into the deep end with your first story -- I wish I had written it! Welcome, Guitarseaman, and please bring us more of your work. Five stars!
Interesting start
Take your time and control the pace, give it time to build to a climax.
great
Very good narration. Please give your time n build this story slowly .thanks for sharing
Thanks
Appreciate the comments. Have written Chapter 1 of Hurricane Matthew (Incest and Taboo) and will alternate between the two and (smile) take it slow (The best way....isn't it).
More Aunty! =o)
Great beginning to the story! I'd love to see her thoroughly and completely dominate the young man. Keep up the great work!
I like your story.
It's a real teaser, looking forward to subsequent chapters. I do love a slow build up.
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