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High School Harem Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/11/16

I say that you have the girl whoscrewed him over from his old school on that volleyball team that comes to the academy for the playoffs before xmas and she tells alan shes sorry for what happened. Leading to put his family in the doghouse with him for not believing him. Then they should all apologize to alan for ever doubting him during xmas break at home. Who knows where that leads with his family?

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by tendernsweet210/11/16

So far...

So far so good as the story turns.! LOL Going to have to try and keep up with who is doing who in this story though as or just might get out of hand before it is over and done with.!** So far the story really has been a surprise to me as per the story line ( which is good for many reasons.^ ) "5" from me.!

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by C_frommn10/11/16

Nice Start

Now that he has 2 of the 4 he will have to wait and see whois next. Maybe Mom and Family will be in on the Plan and Harem. But either way with the 4 Girl's he is friendly with he is Doing Great for a Harem.

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by Anonymous10/11/16

Keep it up good story

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by Anonymous10/12/16

Good story hope to read more soon

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by C_frommn10/13/16

Nice Start

But there are 2 more girls to go and who knows how many other once word gets out. and his Mom will likely hear about it.

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by Cheat10510/14/16

Thank you

Just wanted to thank you all for the feedback and suggestions. I am currently working on part 2. Not sure when it'll be finished, as I only get a little time to concentrate and write each day, but hopefully it won't take too long. Just know that I am working on it, and trying my best not to rush it and screw it up.

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by mammoet10/14/16

great story

more please asap.

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by Anonymous10/16/16

Great story!

Luckiest guy at Redwood Academy (only guy at Redwood Academy!). Great story look forward to reading more. Thought maybe Alan had an emotional attachment to Molly but she's ok with sharing? (Lucky SOB). Can't wait to see the other girls involved. Also grew up with mom, sister, aunt and two female cousins? There's an incest harem if I ever heard of one (dunno if that Is your thing, I read the incest/taboo stories on Lit as well). Figure Alan's in his senior year so maybe his next harem is closer to home. Luck forward to next chapter Katie maybe?

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by arrowglass10/16/16

Looking forward to Ch. 02!

Soon...please!

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by Anonymous11/07/16

nice setup

Lucky boy. I think going to fast - 2 girls in the 1st chapter?

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