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What I Wouldn't Do

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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2205/17/04

Greatly...

...enjoyed this...."What I wouldn't do for that sweat to be me"!!!...That opening is a strong hook, and forced me to read closely.

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by jthserra05/17/04

An erotic beginning...

that wanes in the longing. An excellent lament on what we once had, that we now miss terribly. Very good...

jim : )

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by Syndra Lynn05/20/04

Excellent poem

Nice job.

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