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Brilliant story
I always do enjoy reading stories written by women, as they let you see it from their viewpoint. They know better than a man what turns them on. Do they let you know their secret fantasies through their writing? I wonder. This story had it all. Non consent or was it? It is left for the reader to decide. Hopefully, their will be a Chapter 2.
Great reading
I enjoy how you make her feel so used...yet she found a way to enjoy it
Well written, a rarity
I enjoy your writing style, and I was impressed by the originality of your submission. It was intelligent and the sex was actually believable. Well done.
good story
Liked this story a lot, but it could benefit from maybe one more edit- I noticed a couple of minor typos
REALLY NICE
I LOVED IT.
U should have put more details I think
A long night ?
A long week ! Certainly this won't be a one off night. Alice is now wondering what awaits her. Should she let her home go and move into the hotel ? I hope her friend takes another night off.
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