All Comments on 'Enemy Lines Ch. 08'

I love your work. No pressure but a sequel story to this in the future would be awesome. Thank you for finishing this one. 5/5

Awesome plot-check

Detailed characterization- check

Cliffhangers- check

Hot sex- double check.

Plz plz plz continue this stoyline. I think u r probably at a loss about how the arbiter will react next (or probably about something else entirely) but plz complete this story. Take your time as needed. We will wait.

Excellent story line...will enjoy this story to its´ end...I know you´re not going to leave us here...you´ve left yourself so many ways to go...I´ll be waiting for the the rest of the chapters...Thank you for a great read.

Just wondering if you are still in the land of the living...

Looking for a miracle but don't see one coming along here. A least the Rebels in Star Wars were able to win some battles. Where's the sister when you need her, she was so full of herself she should be able to even beat the big guy.