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The Royal Garden Ep. 01

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by Anonymous

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by kris10e10/09/16

Great Beginning...

LIKE ALWAYS, YOU KNOW HOW TO HOOK US.
I do hope for another chapter soon, I love magic and espionage❤
Keep it coming!!!

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by Ameristy10/09/16

Good start, looking forward to seeing where this goes.

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by Anonymous10/10/16

Looking forward!

Magic, non-con, harem, spying, excellent writing... I can't wait for more!

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by Anonymous10/12/16

So exciting!

Love the premise!!!!! I'm positively salivating for a sequel! I really loved all the hints at what's to come in the garden, discipline, spies, all very exciting!!

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writer's thoughts

As I write this series I'm going to discuss my thoughts in the comments.

I've discovered that I really enjoy writing erotica with a female protagonist. Some PMs have indicated that my female voice is believable, but I'm sure it is tinted by my maleness.

I find the internal monologue of the heroine to be extremely erotic. It's as if I get to be sexually dominant while reading the mind of my submissive and reveling in her every emotion. I have very little interest in writing a male protagonist.

I'm interested in exploring the pseudo coercion aspect of the reluctant spy. She wants to help her country, but like this? The d/s elements really come alive to me when there is some sort of story behind them.

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by Anonymous10/25/16

publication

Very impressed keep it up I think you can be published.

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publishing...

Thanks for your enthusiasm, but I don't think non-consent stuff can be published. Am I wrong?

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