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by Anonymous

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by YDD05/19/04

Beautiful Eyes

A basic little poem to a lover

Should the verb forms match?
"If I could light a thousand candles
For you tonight,
I will pray"

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by tazz31707/24/12

THOSE EYES

in orbs of mystery and intrigue. TK U MLJ LV NV

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