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A great start
That was a great read, it reminds me of the writing of Sharon Green, at least in theme. The story could use some fleshing out; this kind of theme benefits greatly from character development and a background story, so we empathasize with the woman's ordeal. Looking forward to more additions!
Loved it!
I can't wait for the next part!
Very good read !
This was a very good read, I hope you continue it, would love to see more character development.
Thanks for sharing it !
Wow~
Wonderful story. I hope you continue soon. What?s going to happen to the warrior queen?
Kill
I hope she kills the bastard!
Rape ...
... is NOT erotic.
Another please?!?!
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