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what next
I think it was good until a third person was added. This could only spell disaster for a married couple. Next She, Michelle, will want a real man since James, Jenny was with a real woman, Carlos. Then its all down hill from there. Once you entertain other people into the relationship the trust goes out the window. Will Michelle(Mike) see other men or woman? Will James(Jenny) see other men or woman? with out each other knowing? Divorce is in the making. And they had such a wonderful loving relationship. Sad. But I guess that's where the author wants to go with his story.
Don't forget the consequences. Again once the cat is out of the bag you can never put it back in. I really enjoyed the story up to that point. a loving couple having a little role reversal.
Very intresting
This part was great, please continue this story want to see more of carmen.
Lost me
I really enjoyed the first two stories (and the beginning of this one), but when Carmen got added I quickly lost interest. Totally fine if that's your sort of thing, but it seemed like "Jenny" and "Mike" had a certain relationship going and a third person doesn't quite fit imo.
Tpgm
Great story!! Loved the role reversal.
Loved it - loved all of it
Hot, sexy, and very funny. I'm wet all over thanks to you. Please write another chapter.
xoxo,
Di
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