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After All Is Said And Done

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by Anonymous

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by YDD05/19/04

After All Is Said And Done

A simple work on a common topic
that is made more difficult/interesting(?)
to read by the structure of the poem.
Does it work?

Read it yourself and decide.

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by LeBroz12/17/06

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YDD's left a good point;
Give it a read and see for yourself;
My thought is that the way that it's done
Grates enough to support their emotional condition.

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by duddle14601/20/07

Time was...

After all is said and done ~ will we remember - what we once had.

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by Amyfriend11/02/08

Beautiful poem,

and its so true. People really do that. You captured it so well, thanks.

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by BadSanta04/09/11

Another good one...

You've written a good one here, my friend! I've been here more than once, myself, and you've captured it perfectly!

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