HOPE THIS IS CHAPTER 1 OF MANY. GREAT START!
I too hope this is the first of many more chapters as I love your writing style and hell, it had me hard most of the way.
Having stayed at Esmeralda for many years this story rings so true. Looking forward to chapter 2
Love this storyline, waiting for more!
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GREAT START
HOPE THIS IS CHAPTER 1 OF MANY. GREAT START!
Hot story
I too hope this is the first of many more chapters as I love your writing style and hell, it had me hard most of the way.
Love
Having stayed at Esmeralda for many years this story rings so true. Looking forward to chapter 2
This is going to be good
Love this storyline, waiting for more!
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