OMG Peebudy, you did an awesome job with this story, and working in all the details. I really like how you wrote yourself into the narrative, and could envision myself being stimulated while recounting my dream, and had the most wonderful orgasm while reading this.
One of the best premises, one of the most well written stories I've sent inn Literotica. So erotic! Loved it!! Can't wait to here about the real encounter with Daddy, then maybe with Hubby watching!!
I have to wonder though, was she dreaming that she was with John, but really she was with Daddy?
Kidding. Very hot!
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Anonymous12/20/16
Very hot story and very well written.
I loved it. That was a very hot story, and very well written. I love that it is actually based on her real dreams about her father. A touch of reality always makes stories even hotter.
I like the skillful, facile way you coordinated Michelle's dream into the action with John. We're curious what will happen over Thanksgiving. Will Michelle consummate her fantasies/dreams? Inquiring minds want to know. So how about a follow-up.
English
OMG!
OMG Peebudy, you did an awesome job with this story, and working in all the details. I really like how you wrote yourself into the narrative, and could envision myself being stimulated while recounting my dream, and had the most wonderful orgasm while reading this.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
M
Awesome!
One of the best premises, one of the most well written stories I've sent inn Literotica. So erotic! Loved it!! Can't wait to here about the real encounter with Daddy, then maybe with Hubby watching!!
gemini
I've never written a chapter 2 before, but this story is generating such feedback that I think I may.
Keep an eye out for a future installment!
-- peebudy
grrrreat !
Incredible start , please continue
Nice
I have to wonder though, was she dreaming that she was with John, but really she was with Daddy?
Kidding. Very hot!
Very hot story and very well written.
I loved it. That was a very hot story, and very well written. I love that it is actually based on her real dreams about her father. A touch of reality always makes stories even hotter.
Erotic
I like the skillful, facile way you coordinated Michelle's dream into the action with John. We're curious what will happen over Thanksgiving. Will Michelle consummate her fantasies/dreams? Inquiring minds want to know. So how about a follow-up.
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