"Mother and Daughter plan going award party" What's an award party?
Yes, very sexy writing indeed. It definitely calls for a part two!
Could be a good story if you can clean up all the typos and mistakes.
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"Mother and Daughter plan going award party"
What's an award party?
Very sexy
Yes, very sexy writing indeed. It definitely calls for a part two!
brazier = a portable heater consisting of a pan or stand for holding lighted coals
Could be a good story if you can clean up all the typos and mistakes.
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