All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 03 Ch. 08'

Buddy, the way you have written this story is awesome. The build-up is lovely, I am checking the site everyday to look for the updates from you. I have not rated any of your chapters less than five stars. You are a master of writing erotica in a lovable manner.

I missed your chapters and I was worried that you'd gotten bored of telling this tale. Looking forward to your characters taking the next big step.

My guess is that this story has long way to go before it finishes. Keep up the good work.

... to get another instalment. As usual the quality is superb.

As good as ever. When does Tim get a little action? Maybe a three way with Cricket?

Awesome as always, appreciate the great story.

Thanks

So great. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work!

Great story and as others have suggested how about Tim getting in the action with Cricket and Gwen ;-)

Thanks again for the continuing story

Such a great variety of voyeur and exploration into the depth of our bodies. I would have loved to read this as a teenage girl. My parents were so uptight about sex they never even explained the basics. Please please please keep it coming

Never tire of your ongoing erotic and detail arousing, continuous moments. Thanks for sharing your delicious sense of creative pleasure!!..Love to see Gwen and Cricket go to the beach or shoe shopping for some fun and exposure games

Loving this entire series!

great story! thank you!

Just binge read the entire series. Gwen, friends, and family are such awesome characters. My only disappointment is that I'll have to wait for further stories. Thanks badger and well done on your creation!

Just want to say - WOW - such an awesome story and you make it so believable and that is the real talent that you have. Have read all of this series and look forward to more, so much more.

Thanks for posting and sharing !!!

CC

As always "Great"

Thanks,

well written and erotic, thanks a bunch.

Great series! Keep writing!!

The story is tinged with humor, part morality play, and sympathetic to its characters to the point the reader cares about them. This is one of those stories I want never to end, and I have read the unabridged War And Peace I would have gone another thousand pages with that one. I also can relate to the characters as they realistically partially mirror a little of my own experiences. The two gender authorship adds a really effective man AND woman perspective to the narration. A small bit of copy editing would help but there is nothing that caused me to lose track of the story line, as it has done in the past stories I've read on Literotica. Excellent writing!!

Exquisite ! I never tire of awarding 5-😊😊😊😊😊,s to chapter after chapter of this wonderful story.