Highway Road Accidents

Another smart one, KC. The sentences, however tenuous the links, make the piece work for me.

Your poems, and those of susansnow, remind me of a debate I had with an accomplished Literotica poet, 1201, who doesn't visit anymore, about stream of consciousness. He saw it as much more disparate and jumping all over the place and never really reaching a conclusion. Perhaps it's the storyteller in me, but I like some coherence in the narrative as if it's moving in some direction(such as Alabama) even if it takes some other...... Oh, I just saw a blue jay out my window😄

Structure

Exists in my work. Though it might seem stream of consciousness, and a big part of it is, I try to add form and construct after the thoughts are penned. I think there are more nuggets of truth in works that follow a single incident and/or thought. But that's just me. Thank you for following. By the way, seeing a blue jay is a special message from the universe. The blue jay tells us to listen to our inner selves and be honest and forthright. He's also a warning that if you don't, shit might get bad. FYI.