All Comments on 'a poem on touch'

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lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenalmost 20 years ago
Yes!

Yes, sweetie. Exactly like that.

~lucky

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Panting!!

....deliciously sensual....so many magnificent, tiny phrases. This is a delight.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
tech-touch

Lovely alliteration, smattered rhyme and wordplay

with a developing metaphor.

The short lines work well with this one.

A fun yet strong read.

Well done!

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Dancing skin

Adept images of a favorite of mine...nicely done.

~Merry

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A most sensuously erotic write

Exploring the power of a teasing touch to arouse

And from that same hand, the power to tamp down such fired up arousal.

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