by sds195
Lots of suspense & fear, good twist, luckily rather unlikely! I liked the link with To
Kill a Mockingbird.
Extremely well written story. Kind of bizarre. Good use of humor, well paced scariness & a surprisingly deep, insightful ending. Deserves a much higher rating. This eas a really satisfying read.
Great Halloween story! I love that the poor old guy needs to get his jollies this way, sorta sad too. But great story. Keep writing & I'll keep reading!
All i could picture was Velma from scooby doo getting tagged by Pennywise the clown.... But with Tim Curry as old as ol' man Withers... And after i sat and thought about what my shrink would say.... May be im just a crazy old lady... Perverted and waiting for Halloweeen....
While this story was a little predictable, it was still fun. Kudos on a writing job well done!
I liked the story.It turned me on.I wish it had some oral in it.
i couldnt take the story seriously from the very beginning for some reason so its nice how it ended! I like my erotic horror but not slasher horror so cheers for the twist
Slutty virgin nerd girl and a creepy old man doing the nasty on Halloween. What's not to like? Good twist at the end. Love that she accepted cash for it, making her as much a whore as a slut. Dark, but not too dark. Well done!