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by bluerains05/18/04

the

beauty lives on.....sorry last word not picked up

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by Liar05/18/04

o well...

I liked it anyway :)

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by YDD05/18/04

Senryu Contractions?

If you feel you must hold the 5 - 7 - 5 line count,
why not change the middle line to something like:
"memories held in relics" ?

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