Seduction of a Conservative Wife 01

Utter stupidity

Skip the sex parts, after the third paragraph, I skipped the whole fucking thing. Just stupid and boring.

Great intro!

Wonderful intro to what appears to be a wonderful series. Eagerly awaiting the further development of these actors and their adventures. Don't keep us waiting!

..... in fact I think it would make our love stronger.

HA HAHA HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

COMMENTS

No matter the comment,good or bad, makes any difference.Writers could care less and haters just keep on writing hate.

Comment ?

For a new baboon ?
Of course 1*

Very interesting amazing how you get her to open her sexualities keep writing screw the haters

1*

cuck shit.

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats!!! And go on ;-)

This writer just ended another marriage with this chuck crap.

A loyal devoted wife with two kids turns into a slut. And a husband that goes a long with it. Another chuck story how how to end your marriage,. I bet his seed is potent and he knocks her up. And she continues to cheat. What a crappy story line.

What dribble!

Why this has a score over 3 is beyond me. It's not written particularly well and the actions of the characters are totally unbelievable.

Good first effort

The writing is pretty darn good and the story line, while not everyone's cup of tea, is not bad, either. (BTW, aren't we reading this "cuck crap" because we seek the titillation of imagining a wife being seduced? The deed is done either by us or to us, or perhaps to our wife or another's wife? One of those choices almost certainly applies to each reader. Otherwise, why are you reading this "cuck crap"?) Regardless, the author has put forth a credible first effort, and with an original twist. Write on!

Well...

A common trope, oft repeated on Lit., is that religious women are taught from a young age by "strict" parents, nuns, and so forth, that sex is shameful and dirty. Well, here is a young wife that took that lesson to heart, and acted on it!

A story for real brain sick people!!! MINUS 5*!!!

A cuckold/wimp story for perverts to wank off!!! I think its a reflexion of that insane author!! May be he is or would be a cuckold in real life!! Its wonderful to lick the slimy spunk out of his slut isn't it ??!!! You are real pervert and brain sick!!!

kids went off to grandmother?

in the beginning of the story author noted for two kids. and then.... it looks they disappeared. no any words about them. or they would watch for those wild games keeping the silence? :)

So when

Did you move out to live with grandma and the kids? She kept the house and all your money and never saw you or the kids again. So I hope you at least aren't paying her alimony.
By the way she never loved you, thats why she was so easy.... but as dumb as you are, who cares?

Giant Steps

2Old paints a conservative Sweetie, then proceeds to change her into a horn-bitch within a week or so, with NO real seduction effort expended ... just lucky she liked soft porn (very unlikely!)

Too many giant leaps. The 'first beer scene' with Hubby was surreal. Hubby already knows he is trouble and could be loaded with STDs, but jumps right into cuckoldry (again with no real seduction!) Think this is miscategorized, because Our Bold Bull is a master hypnotist and this should be in Mind Control!

Really excellent

I had to keep reminding myself that the wife is a stodgy catholic raised conservative. I love the theme and your writing is exceptional. This is a story that can carry through several chapters and even work her bi husband and perhaps weave other men and women into the web. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

Hallelujah!

Something with at least the semblance of a plot. 4*

Sorry...reading this was a big waste of time...

Sorry...reading this was a big waste of time...so it doesn't deserve any comments...Just a 1*

You are too old

Too old to write, evidently. What a lame ass attempt at a story. Huge waste of time to write and read.

Could you make these characters any more stupid, or predictable?

Had to start skimming as soon as the husband started acting like a dumb shit. What kind of person finds stories about stupid timid self-destructive people entertaining? "I'm going to turn your wife into my cum slurping ass fucking alley whore, and you are going to help me. Oh, OK."

Guess who finds this story engaging and compelling? Right, cum slurping ass-fucked alley whores, and the guys who dream about being their bulls, or their wimps. Stories like this provide the same function as offal in an ecosystem, food for maggots, or people who live like maggots. Congratulations.

stupid

Writing not bad. Editing not good. Characters individually believable. Kept me engaged almost through first page. But then, the lunacy of the plot made me quit reading. What husband with an adoring wife who is starting to loosen up a bit through the videos agrees to help another man fuck her? Too dumb of a plot.

The worst on the site...

A completely unrealistic piece of crap. Stopped reading at ""Well Rob, I understand why you want Liz, after all that's why I married her and I can't stop you trying for her but I don't think you'll succeed, she is very conservative, sexually innocent, naïve and very loyal."
What the fuck? toooldforthis is this really how you see ANYONE reacting? what an insulting JOKE. You're wasting your reader's time, and showing NO respect for us or yourself.

Not a very good read...

The idea of a conservative wife being seduced isn't new but it's always interesting. You completely destroyed it. The wife isn't conservative, maybe for one paragraph, there is no build up and sex scenes are pretty lame. From the moment the neighbour arrives, (from nowhere) it's obvious what will happen. By the way, married for 10 years, with children (where were the childeren) and they haven't even seen a softcore film... 2* (for trying, try harder)

Fantastic story!

I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Pathetic crap

The wife is just a heartless Cunt and hubby is a loser. Why the fuck would you marry someone who doesn't like having sex with you and the kicker is you find out she loves sex with someone else and you've been played. You would have to be a mindless fuck to think this piece of crap is good.

She was shy and timid but seemed more like a pro when she got the guy tied. This guys gonna make a real out of control pig out of her

lame

ANOTHER lame story from a closet homosexual pretending to "love honor and cherish" the "uptight" (but uncommonly loose) woman in its life.

Just forget the prerequisite beginning and go to posting on the gay board. I was married, but preferred watching women while I got my jollies form my own gender... etc etc

I'd like to say I read the entire story, but by the second page it was the same old crap that has littered this place for too long.

[ AGRE WITH FR45

That so many would read the story knowing full well what to expect and then bitch about the content is amazing to me, why waste your time? .

Painful and pitiful to me is the realization that these men never had a woman who was capable of sparking their imagination sufficiently to permit them to become excited about the prospect of her exploring her own sexuality and growing in it.

I could go on for many pages about this but only wish to ask them to leave the genre those of us who can enjoy it rather than hanging around bullying the writers and turning the genre into one in which only cheating occurs and the storiy is only complete when the principals have destroyed each others lives.

Forget the anons

This is a nice start. Ignore the usual raft of anon complaints, but treasure the ever insightful "chuck shit" guy- that's pure gold, the Hemingway of anon drooling idiots. Regardless, keep at it. You ever get stung by nettles? They HURT! Even as a punishment phase of some S&M, it would be horrible. Maybe they have actually been used but I can't imagine it. Of course the wife's transformation is a bit rapid, but what the heck- I look forward to the next phase. 5 stars to help counteract some anon trolling.

No complaints

People don't like to admit it, but the most popular live-action animal shows are still the ones where merciless predators kill and eat cute little animals. The author clearly told us where this is headed, so there's no room for complaint. If you don't like predation or marriages turning into train wrecks, don't read it.

Great start

Can't wait for the next chapter

Another stupid cuckold will all end in tears good job it is only fiction.

1*

cuck shit.

Interesting

Why oh why do these ' Anon' jerks bother to read what is clearly a Cuck story then whine about it? I thought it was very good and I'm looking forward to the story developing, well done.

Cuck a doodle doo!

Oh yes, I can see that letting Rob fuck his wife will definitely make their marriage and love stronger....NOT. How can any writer think that letting another man fuck your wife will make their marriage better. I read that same thought process in lots of stories but I think that has got to be the biggest misinformed crock of shit a pen can put to paper. Why don't you make the husband have a set of balls for a change and not let his wife fuck around. But I guess when cucks are writing the stories........

Not Bad

A quick conversion, but otherwise held my interest. Don't understand the anonymous whiners. Put down an honest critique and perhaps the writer can improve. Just a quick "cuckold shit" is infantile.

I thought the switch from totally repressed to total slut was not believable but I liked it overall. Ignore the anonymous clowns who put no effort into the site.

Keep it cumming!

Great cuck story. Not the usual stuff. Thanks and ignore the haters. I agree that if they don't like cuck stories, then move on.

Just dreadful.

Is this the best you can do? Some blow-up doll wife and an even more brainless husband. And it is just so suspenseful, I can't imagine what might happen next.

Surprise me. On second thought, just quit while you're a head.

Mixed

Nicely written. Held my interest. Some of the negative comments were constructive; the wife's sudden "conversion" did seem hard to swallow--but this is fiction, and fiction has its own pace. Five * easily.

hot hot hot

I'm hoping there is going to be another chapter. Can't wait to see how he pleases Liz.

Masochistic husbands?

Why are there so many stories here about hubbys with the itch to see their wives have sex with another man,who then push their wives into the arms of a guy with a horse cock. The wife swoons and the hubby is lucky she can even feel his dick in her. Or as in this case let her fuck a neighbor. How many different ways can this end badly?

Since you are

writing it in first person and implying that it is autobiographical, I do submit that you are certifiably insane!!!

Interesting

Some interesting material in there. But the way she went from only having sex in the dark and not liking oral sex... to being completely the opposite after watching a video is not believable.