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You've Done It AGAIN!!!!
Sir Ronde - - -
Again, I say, you are a most accomplished wordsmith. I sense in your work a significant measure of effort in that you most definitely researched the era in which you have cast your characters, perhaps not unlike the methods and extent once employed by the late Louis L'Amour.
Your story is excellent, and to paraphrase one of Clint Eastwood's Dirty Harry episodes, "YOU MADE MY DAY!!"
Thanks for the great story.
Boswell
The page 3 is redundant.
voted 5
great!
Great story telling. you develope the story and characters well.
Wonderful!!
I have read historical romance for years and this story ranks up there with the professionals! You not only created wonderful in depth characters but you gave the reader a true feel for the era in which the story took place. Keep up the great work!!
Fabulous!
That was really great, the tone of your story was awesome. I liked the plot and character development, it was an enjoyable read.
Everyone needs a little romance in their life
Classic "lite" erotica... I think you would enjoy "The Surrender of Lady Charlotte" by Lizbeth Dusseau. A bit more hardcore but the chivalry is the same.
Thank you for sharing....
YEP RONDE DONE IT AGAIN
I HAVE READ SEVERAL STORIES FROM THIS WRITER AND LOVE HIS WORK TRUE ROMANCES AND GREAT STORY TELLING. ALL WOVEN TOGHTHER WITH REALISTIC CHARACTERS MAKE THEM WELL WORTH THE READ. "JAKK"
Wow!
Not at all what I expected. What a jewel of a story! I absolutely like the style as well.
Well Done!
Ye truly ha'e the gift of gab. 'Tis the character development and the smooth flow of story plot that entrances me. Keep on, ye highwayman!
A rollicking good tale
loved it from beginning to end - what a spirited girl she is - pity she didn't castrate Percival - well done - as always you tell a good yarn.
Should have explained away the highwayman career
Thats the only thing lacking in this tale. Some white-washing explanation why Ashton became a highwayman.
3
Well written. I really like Elaine.
But there was a lot to disappoint me. First, we get a very vivid description of the kinky fucking in Percival's study. But only a strong implication that Elaine and Ashton have shared anything other than a chaste kiss.
For a romance, it wasn't very romantic. We don't see any of their falling in love, only know that they do. It felt kind of like you had a very good idea of what you wanted for the story for 1/2-2/3 of it, but after Percival's chased them down, you just slapped a trite ending on it and called it a day.
Oh well.
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