Earl and Mom Ch. 02

I don't know if my input on Chapter 1 had any effect on Chapter 2, or if this was already written, but I like it.

Earl seems to have embraced what I was describing: If she doesn't say stop, she means "keep going". If she doesn't want to watch, she wouldn't be watching. And if she doesn't want to participate, she won't. So, with the ball in Earl's court, it's up to him to continue to push the limits to see if there are any.

Now for the critique: lots of typos that detract and distract from the story. "Loo" instead of "look", "stork" instead of "stroke", etc., which you should have caught with a line-by-line review of what you'd written before posting. It takes a few more minutes, but it's time well spent.

Why do some of you authors insist on writing in present tense? It's just dumb.

I enjoyed this very arousing mother and son story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

keep it coming, great job.

Love it....

Great story line and development. I really enjoy how you let us know what they are thinking and how that doesn't always mesh with what they end up doing. Just like we all do in life. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story

Can't wait to see how it develops.

Very good story

It is awkward at first but son masturbating for mom is an exciting experience. After the first time both relax and it is enjoyable for both.

Good Read***

He's a nasty little rascal!! Thanks for sharing

Great Build Up

Far far better than the 1st episode. Would suggest not to delay the posting of the next episode. The build up of the earlier two episodes are still fresh in the minds of the reader. Delaying too much may result in some loss of excitement.

Very Good Story

I like the story line involving a horny mom and son pushing each other to their limits. The mother's POV was much more interesting than the son's. He was very tentative in his effort while the mother expressed her horniness graphically and with a nice dirty twist.

Typos are a big problem as has been pointed out. A little extra time scanning the story before submission would pay dividends.

I loved the storyline but it was way too short.

loved when my mom told me to stoe it harder and faster

she wanted to see me cum. And boy did I ever cum!! that was the turn of our relationship and 10 years later we're still doing it 2 or 3 time s week.