I can't imagine after something like that happens, how you couldn't make it happen again.
mom's noses are unbelievable, aren't they?
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Anonymous10/12/16
Believable, but Poorly Written
I don't want to be mean if English is not your first language, but this was very poorly written, and it's not just typos, which I can forgive if they aren't totally distracting.
I am the first to admit my grammar and punctuation is not the best. I have a Master's degree in Mathematics and Physics. I hated composition class.
I thought the point of this website is to share erotic stories not judge writing ability. I do know things could flow better. I am trying to do better. I have been lucky with my sexual exploits so I thought I would share them.
Some want more information or think I should have gone on to doing more. But like this story nothing happened again between me and my sister.
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Anonymous10/13/16
Awesome story!
I like this because it's not written as a fictional "story", it's more of an account. And a hot one at that.
Don't let these clowns talking about "grammar and spelling" get you down. What kill-joys. They must be really popular at parties.
Great job, I hope you keep writing!
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Anonymous11/14/16
Great story
We are not paying a dime to read only idiots who haven't added any writings of their own would say something negative. I call them idiots because there is no proof they can do better.
English
To short
Wish it was longer and more explicit.
nice
nice story, well written, believable.
I can't imagine after something like that happens, how you couldn't make it happen again.
mom's noses are unbelievable, aren't they?
Believable, but Poorly Written
I don't want to be mean if English is not your first language, but this was very poorly written, and it's not just typos, which I can forgive if they aren't totally distracting.
Gramer and spelling
I am the first to admit my grammar and punctuation is not the best. I have a Master's degree in Mathematics and Physics. I hated composition class.
I thought the point of this website is to share erotic stories not judge writing ability. I do know things could flow better. I am trying to do better. I have been lucky with my sexual exploits so I thought I would share them.
Some want more information or think I should have gone on to doing more. But like this story nothing happened again between me and my sister.
Awesome story!
I like this because it's not written as a fictional "story", it's more of an account. And a hot one at that.
Don't let these clowns talking about "grammar and spelling" get you down. What kill-joys. They must be really popular at parties.
Great job, I hope you keep writing!
Great story
We are not paying a dime to read only idiots who haven't added any writings of their own would say something negative. I call them idiots because there is no proof they can do better.
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