The author did a very poor job in this story!
This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, poor written, low context and it is not even hot nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and waste of time reading all the way though.
by
Anonymous10/19/16
nonconsent???
At this time the term "nigger" is affectionately offered to officially describe the author/protagonist.
We all know one when seen as well as read from, and this case deserves such acclaim.
Scum, inhuman filth... all prepositions apply.
by
Anonymous01/27/17
imitation
The author is warped and writing about his own sickness.
i agree w/ another of the critics in that this was a bad story about a power hungry male w/ serious inadequacies. No fantasies here,
English
What a crap and garbage story!
The author did a very poor job in this story!
This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, poor written, low context and it is not even hot nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and waste of time reading all the way though.
nonconsent???
At this time the term "nigger" is affectionately offered to officially describe the author/protagonist.
We all know one when seen as well as read from, and this case deserves such acclaim.
Scum, inhuman filth... all prepositions apply.
imitation
The author is warped and writing about his own sickness.
i agree w/ another of the critics in that this was a bad story about a power hungry male w/ serious inadequacies. No fantasies here,
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