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@ "valid point"
Thanks for unwittingly reinforcing my point, anony. And it would be more polite if you used a made-up name like the rest of us (except Randi), so I know who I'm addressing. I'll just call you "guy who doesn't know what the word 'lie' means."
I'm not accusing Randi of being a racist. I'm pointing out how foolish it is to claim that anyone who mentions race or skin tone is a racist. Perhaps my argument was a little too nuanced for you. I'll try to dumb it down next time.
For the record, my name isn't Joe, and I haven't swung anything in the past few years except a golf club and a baseball bat. But hey, no matter what I tell you, and no matter what I write, you'll just keep putting words in my mouth, regardless. To paraphrase an old quote, don't even try to speak for me. You're not smart enough.
I guess this was someone else
"Why mention "African American?" How racist of her!" Sounds like an accusation. Why so jealous, Batman?
LOL @ anony
Next time I'll include the sarcasm tags. What a fool.
Now, reset your IP so you can comment again. This is fun!
Nicely done
I would have liked a bit more of the husband and the mental gymnastics it seemed like she'd been through. Perhaps she sees hubby peering in? Perhaps some guilty comparison as to how this lover really satisfied her and left her wanting more? Story though very well written very clean. Obviously edited with a keen eye for detail.
I agree with the others on some points
I don't completely agree with the racism thing, but i do think that it was added for the visual picture that it produces. I don't think that's racist though. It's not promoting or demoting one race before the others. It is just there to set the scene for people who do find interracial interaction erotic. Its kind of like the Kardashians saying that they prefer to date black men; or Tiger Woods saying that he only dates white women. It is a preference.
Why is it that it is only racist when black and white people are mentioned? Many Asians come to America and marry white men. Many white men date Latino women. No one bats an eyelash. But as soon as it is black and white, everyone sees it as racially important.
That said, I have to agree with everyone that there isn't much of a story here. It is a sex scene. Flash stories are one scene in which the reader can get a feel for the entire story. We see the character's personalities in that scene. This scene told us nothing about the people, other than they were horny. It may be erotic, but there is no story. In my humble opinion, any story in which sex is the ENTIRE story, isn't a story. Sex should be part of it, but not the whole story. Once again, just my opinion.
Another cuck story
It was a beautiful love story and would have stood alone them unfortunately the mention of race and that husband had arranged it, spoilt it for me. It certainly wasn't a quickie. .
The love scene was well written I really enjoyed that part.
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