Husband might as well pack his bag because this couple is done-put a fork into it. Wife will never stop at 1 lover.. Soon husband will washing her lover's socks.
And if she lost 50 or 60 lbs, she would lose her breasts. You do know that, right? And what the hell is a nursing assistant? Do nurses have assistants? And why was she living at her parents house 2 years after college? And why the hell would this hot, built guy with a 12" pecker be a lowly assistant? Why not a doctor, a lawyer, a porn star?
This was a waste of time to read and to write.
by
Anonymous10/15/16
You put it up here
It will get read, and you will get the comments it deserves, including these bad ones because it was a very bad story.. sorry but if you write a good one, you can bask in glory
by
Anonymous10/15/16
yikes.
That was kind of stupid, the guy gets off with 2 strokes on his little dick? No wonder she wants to cheat.
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Anonymous10/15/16
Scores
Of course the scores and comments are "cooked." And, the moderator(s) of this site are as sick as the majority of the authors. Has anyone noticed that the good authors have pretty much abandoned this site. Moderators, be careful. The kick backs you get from readers clicking on redirects are going to plummet.
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Anonymous10/15/16
Another shit day for LW
What else is new? Bonnie, the whore, is at it again.
Story looks like it was written in five minutes by a cuck fag idiot..... Worst ever....
by
Anonymous10/16/16
Bumper crop of true Shit stories today
I've seen some bad days in this category , but today's crop ranks with the very worst of them.
by
Anonymous10/16/16
Good story, but needs work.
This was an interesting story-line; however, it was riddled with typos, gramatical errors and generally weak writing.
Keep writing but, please get some editing help. Writing is just like working out at the gym. The more you do it, the stronger you get.
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Anonymous10/16/16
please old writers come back lit.com
give us some manly stories.
by
Anonymous10/16/16
Boring plot, typical cuck character.
Is this all you got?
by
Anonymous10/16/16
1*
fag cuck shit.
by
Anonymous10/16/16
Not only does she disrespect her hubby with words but then she goes and fucks the guy even after he verbally abused he hubby trying to humiliate him. I never hit a girl in my life but in hubbys position it would've been difficult not to . She will only escalate from here go to divorce attorney. Lover boy would be surprised when he gets a bat across his knee while leaving work one night. I'd rather do time in jail than allow anyone to abuse and humiliate me like that.
English
At least it wasn't some man sucking cock
Just a sick story by someone who doesn't know how to write.
No comments...1*
No comments...1*
Sad marriage/relationship
Husband might as well pack his bag because this couple is done-put a fork into it. Wife will never stop at 1 lover.. Soon husband will washing her lover's socks.
AGAIN
No Body makes you read these stories,
You do know that breasts are fat, right?
And if she lost 50 or 60 lbs, she would lose her breasts. You do know that, right? And what the hell is a nursing assistant? Do nurses have assistants? And why was she living at her parents house 2 years after college? And why the hell would this hot, built guy with a 12" pecker be a lowly assistant? Why not a doctor, a lawyer, a porn star?
This was a waste of time to read and to write.
You put it up here
It will get read, and you will get the comments it deserves, including these bad ones because it was a very bad story.. sorry but if you write a good one, you can bask in glory
yikes.
That was kind of stupid, the guy gets off with 2 strokes on his little dick? No wonder she wants to cheat.
Scores
Of course the scores and comments are "cooked." And, the moderator(s) of this site are as sick as the majority of the authors. Has anyone noticed that the good authors have pretty much abandoned this site. Moderators, be careful. The kick backs you get from readers clicking on redirects are going to plummet.
Another shit day for LW
What else is new? Bonnie, the whore, is at it again.
"And They Lived Happily Ever After"
Yeh.....Sure
Worst ever
Story looks like it was written in five minutes by a cuck fag idiot..... Worst ever....
Bumper crop of true Shit stories today
I've seen some bad days in this category , but today's crop ranks with the very worst of them.
Good story, but needs work.
This was an interesting story-line; however, it was riddled with typos, gramatical errors and generally weak writing.
Keep writing but, please get some editing help. Writing is just like working out at the gym. The more you do it, the stronger you get.
please old writers come back lit.com
give us some manly stories.
Boring plot, typical cuck character.
Is this all you got?
1*
fag cuck shit.
Not only does she disrespect her hubby with words but then she goes and fucks the guy even after he verbally abused he hubby trying to humiliate him. I never hit a girl in my life but in hubbys position it would've been difficult not to . She will only escalate from here go to divorce attorney. Lover boy would be surprised when he gets a bat across his knee while leaving work one night. I'd rather do time in jail than allow anyone to abuse and humiliate me like that.
SKYPING AND SKIPPING
leads to marital problems but not if you are flexible. TK U MLJ LV NV
Duh
I printed the story and took a nice sloppy SHIT on it. The story was fucking shit.
What is this?
What is this? It seems more a vomit than any thing else. Maybe the man hater @amyyum will find it interesting.
Learn to spell!
Pathetic slut & cuck shit...
with no ending or consequences.
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