by Sabledrake
The story was great. If you get any spelling or grammar geeks ignore them. Heck it was the first time in a long time that I actually cheered at the end of a story. Thank you so much. Always, E
want more Rommy and Remmy *^_^*
oh yeah, big time!!!
More, more, more!!!
Seriously, I love them and think they could carry series if you felt so inclined to throw them into one. I haven't been sent into such a Yum Yum state over werewolves since... *thinks very hard* well, your werewolves have out Yum Yum'd all previous reading experiences. I enjoy Emma Holly and Laurell K. Hamilton, but their were wolves, while quite nice, don't perk my interest half as much as your two just did in that small story.
I think you got gold with them. True gold.
*happy shivers*
Moonncat
Whoah. Didn't think I'd like a NonHuman. Didn't even know if I like hairy men ^^; But this was Hot with a capital H. Mad props. Continuation, please.
Well done! Your descriptions are wonderful: her naked romp in the cold water, the powerfully erotic wolves, the strong and muscular men, the incredible sex -
Yum!
It's been awhile since I read a good werewolf story. Great job! I hope to see more of these three!
Aaaaargh. Wonderful story, nothing less than I expected, but I'm a little /twitchy/ about werewolves named Remus.
Well, hey, in my mind, Mr. and Mrs. Lupin should have known better than to name their baby Remus ... talk about asking for it! I can just see their conversation after he was diagnosed. "I told you! I told you we should have named him after _my_ grandfather! Now, look. Just look."
WOW this is soo hot... loved it - pls write some more!
Dang, talk about primal urges. I'd love to read more about the Hairy Men.
That was amazingly hot stuff... and totally fun to boot! When can we see the next episode to that? Hopefully so please, pretty pleasee....
Thank you for delivering a piece that was both shamelessly fun and completely satisfying in its detail. You dealt with a heated subject (in every sense of the word) admirably. Well, well done indeed.
Bravo - more please. . . tell us if the brothers made her glad she stayed. . .
I hope you continue on with this story, and safe sucks. They area great!
So fucking hot. Would've liked some knot action from Remy, but nonetheless this was delicious. =)
I've enjoyed some of your previous works involving a certain horned creature but I had to finally comment after reading this! Well written with great tone and cadence. And about my favorite fantasy...fantasies...so my kinky mind and libido thank you!
Slan
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I really loved this one and I would love for the story to continue a bit more.
This was just what I was looking for. A bit taboo, sexy as hell, and wild, almost reluctant pleasure. Great story!
The story had it all fantasy with erotic sex and great writing it was really fun. The writer is on the extreme side of excellent with this bold tale. The only down side is the story ended with some degree of brevity that could've been more embellished with a princess finding her prince or perhaps becoming a werewolf herself or perhaps an awakening to the fact that she was born a werewolf and just found it out.At anyrate the story was great on its own. Thanks for the fantasy! !
Loved this story and would love to read more about this trio!!! PLEASE!!!
I would love to see more on this trio, maybe she could marry/mate with them and they could start a family, maybe have twins ;-)?
They could also get the cabins fixed up a bit and set up sort of a rustic bed and breakfast.....
Anyway, please add to the story!
Totally loved this--so fucking hot! The only thing that would have perfected it for me is if they "knotted"... a major fantasy of mine. I do hope you continue with more adventures of Remy, Rommie and Jaylee. In the meantime my pussy will just have to fantasize about being reamed, knotted and impregnated by them.
I really loved the story! I agree that you should write more about the three of them! Great plot and storyline! <3
Your story was great, I tried to give you 5 stars but it would only let me give you 2. It's still a great story, hope you'll write another chapter.
A well written werewolf story with a very good plot and with excellent character development. I would have loved to see you continue this excellent story with Jaylee finally asking Marion to join her for a week. She talks Remy in to meeting Marion in his human form and to seduce her in his human form but change while he is fucking her. She and Rommie would start off in their human forms fucking and change into their werewolf forms just before they both orgasmed. Rommie would turn her because she wanted to experience sex in the werewolf form. Marion see all 3 transform, is scared they will kill and eat her, all 3 will ravish her body, and
the last being how aroused she is from watching them all change into werewolves. All thoughts of how she hated hairy men just went out the window and are replaced by how soft Remy's fur felt rubbing across her body. She sees how Jaylee has embraced her wolf and wonders if sex with Remy would be better as a wolf if she was one like Jaylee? Even the wolf/human was the best sex she had ever experienced and felt it would only be better if she was a wolf. REtired Army NCO
This is a great story fleshed out with lots of details. Your world-building is well done and I like the pacing. This is a sexy short story that I would love to read in a longer format.