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So clear...
...and controlled. "funny how one remembers odd things...the needle skipping...scattered sounds of teacups..." That is a writer who knows where he is going and how to get there.
You know you it's good when...
a reader can feel as though she's in the place you're writing about. I felt it, saw it, heard it. I formed a complete picture of it without even trying. That is what I love most about poetry--the ability to transport someone, to convey feeling and image strongly. Thank you.
a pROSE BY ANY OTHER NAME. . .
Yesterday this author posted as strong an example of a prose poem (titled "Semtex") as you are likely to see here on Literotica.
Today he posts one that he calls "A Prose Poem".
I hate to disagree,
but this is far more "poem" than "prose".
The format alone belies the prosety,
but that doesn't mean that you should not read and enjoy this work.
It is very good
and you should.
A highly recommended read
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Okay than, let's call it stylized prose poetry.
Serene.
This poem is filled with wonderful visual images and builds to a heartwarming resolution.
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