All Comments on 'The Fall of the Wolf Ch. 12'

I have to say, I enjoyed each and every chapter of this story. Your writing was captivating and believable. It was also a bonus that you didn't kill Rafe! Some authors add components to a story and never build upon them. You never did that; which was much appreciated.

I am looking forward to your next authoring.

So much fun and a bonus is that it is historical. I have enjoyed your story so much that I went and read your stories from Haremgirl times. Loved those too, it amazes me how you come up with the details. I must say I am not into some of your fetishes and sexual intrigues but your writing allowed me to get past that as it fit the stories. Thanks again for your stories and hope to read more of you. I will send you a personal note with more detailed feedback. Marc

Very good story! Thank you for sharing!

Request/challange: a story with Sheikh and a blond...

A wonderful story with a plot that's fun when it needs to be and serious when it needs to be. The writing is lovely to read and flows well and the erotic scenes are nicely done without falling into repetition as many stories do as they get longer. Glad we got a happy ending and would love to see more stories from the author. Good job. What else is there really to say :)

5/5 stars - enjoyable from start to finish

Welcome back with your exquisite story series! Please write and dazzle us with more!

But if you are editing for publishing, the way she realized Livius was the enemy seemed very contrived. It came out of nowhere.

Everything else was great.

you have always written the best stories on literotica that I've ever read. your stories are well researched and take you into the time that it's set in. can't wait to read more of your stories.

I love your stories. Your imagination is so creative. Keep it up. Can you write Christian love stories without erotic contents too? I bet you can.