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by My Erotic Tail05/19/04

Short and sweet~

Nice lil poetic play, and heartfelt warmth of words. Nice.

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by Maria239405/19/04

good work

you said what you meant, n 4 lines flat, you did it well :)

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by YDD05/20/04

Distant

Sometimes four lines are all one needs.
In line two have you considered a verb other than "watch",
perhaps something like "wish"?

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by doormouse03/30/05

Nice

Kinda reminds me of, "My Bonnie ... over the ocean... "

Cute.

:-)

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