All Comments on 'John and Joan'

Chapter 2 coming soon, right?

Written as though a first person experience. When I was John's age, I was in the same boat! Brought a lot of old memories back. Some pleasant, others saddening. You wrote a captivating story of true life for many people. Thank you for sharing and for the very entertaining ride. Great story and a true five! jntiques

It totally depends on your values. Honesty, respect, true-to-self....None of the characters were full of themselves. You portrayed honest, incomplete but HONORABLE people. That made them extraordinary.

Are you up for a continuation?

These two people have ordinary names, but are hardly ordinary. They're not that far up the people scale to be called ordinary. They are poor, they are dull, they really have no self confidence at all. You can say they deserve each other and in that sense this was a good story. Two very dull people get together and appreciate each other's mediocrity and are happy with it. I, for one, don't want to read any more about them although others are panting with anticipation of your follow-up story of blah. 3*

a good story..well described social ineptness being overcome

I really loved this story. I am sure there are thousands of these in the real world. I hope the journey continues. At least through marriage and first child.

Wonderful story, I wish all people were, sincere, with their fears, but with respect for others.

Please, I hope that the author write a sequel to this story, it really deserves.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

karma sets in and develops, TK U MLJ LV NV

deserve happiness.

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adjective

1.

with no special or distinctive features

I REST MY CASE!

Really enjoyed this story and was reminded of how it used to be for me. Though honestly I didnt find either of them boring but very lovable.

There is more to tell, including the change in personality they both have after this.