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by tarablackwood2205/19/04

Lovely!

...the third stanza especially......"shouldn't I save the blossoms?" is such a perfect question there.

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by Syndra Lynn05/19/04

Bravo!

Wonderful words, familiar sentiments. Thanks for the great read.

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by Maria239405/19/04

Boo!!!!!

wonderful, vivid expressions, you are a nurturer, a golden soul..come heal me :)

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by YDD05/20/04

A Poet's Garden

The garden metaphor of life
in which the poet feels to be
fallow ground
and the grind
of day to day
drips more pain
than beauty
which little of
or both
are blossom pressed
between the leaves
garden grown
the poet's own.

A good read

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