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A Poem About A Child’s Grief, A Mot

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by Maria239405/19/04

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all children grieve
know not, and
no, not only about war
yet they grieve
and we know

3 words say so much boo, so much

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by BooMerengue05/19/04

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The proper title is... (drum roll)

A Poem About A Child's Fear, A Mother's Grief, A Citizen's Shame. A Country's Apathy!

Guess it IS a bit long!! LOL TY Maria, Lady of Grace!

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by 05/19/04

Says it all

...in only three words. So simple. So important.

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by Vampiric_Mirage05/19/04

Simplistic Beauty

If only the world could read your poem & heed its words...

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by LeBroz12/15/06

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Nice sentiments in a poem with a title hugely longer than its body.

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by duddle14601/01/07

brief

The essense of simplicity. A message in three words. Well spoken.

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