Birthday Surprise

"Words fell like rocks from my stupid, stammering mouth."

A bit like your writing, then.

WHEN YOU GET SOMETHING THERE IS ANOTHER PART

you have to give something back. TK U MLJ LV NV

Questions.

Where was Eddie whilst you were getting a bj? What does your wife get in return?
By the way Eddie has a huge cock, but your wife already knows that!

OK , who has hacked the " When we were married " , " Seperate Vacations" authors Lit . account ?

OK , so now I'm supposed to believe that one of the most in depth authors this site has ever had , decides to do a flash stroke story ?
I'm having difficulties wrapping my head around that.
OK for what it was , but not Lit worthy in my humble opinion . This is something you can find every day on other lesser sites.
3 *'s ( on reputation only)

Not same

When We Were Married written by DanielQSteele.

Just a two-bit wannabe.

Tailoring the name of a great author to attract the careless reader. Didn't even bother to read..noted the cheap trick and jumped to the voting (1*) and made comment.

Definitely NOT ....

Daniel Quentin Steele aka DanielQSteele1. Pick a new name - please.

Kind of boring

nothing interesting for me.. well written non-event!

Again

Nobody made you read it...

Got egg on my face !

I didn't notice the difference , thank goodness the original didn't stoop to this !

Is this Dinky Queer Sissy?

First, this should be in Erotic Couplings. Being married was irrelevant to the plot and action.

Second, it was well written, if kind of boiler plate-ish. But most Erotic Coupling stories are boiler plate descriptions, since they are 10% mental and 90% physical. Without the mental/emotional element fucking is just, fucking.

Last, what was the point? That he wanted someone other than his wife's sexual romance? DQS usually has the man being humiliated by a wife wanting better sex from someone, anyone, else. This begged the questions of why he was not married to Becky, or why he bothered to marry someone he has so little respect and compassion for? Which is also a DQS specialty, cruelty toward a devoted husband.

Not sure what the ID similarity has to do with the author's goals. His first story is queer, so maybe this author is still searching for his genre? Here's a hint, its between your ears, not your legs. Good luck finding it.

what is your wife going to want.

Sorry but this did nothing for me, husband acting like a 16 year old.

This is appalling

The husband having sex with another woman! This lewd and lascivious behavior is discussing. This out and out cheating is the cause of the moral break down in the US.
He should be home wanking his 3" dicklet while she is fucking 30 to 200 men. That is how a marriage should be run.

After reading this I could understand why...

After reading this I could understand why he had chosen to marry another woman and not his best friend and lover. Marrying her he knew that soon or later she would cheat on him (like she was doing with her actual boyfriend) and turn him into a cuckold. What is more difficult to understand is the real reason for his wife to give him this kind of present...maybe she wanted a similar birthday present. Then will he have the face to refuse it? For sure her reason wasn't love! 2*