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The Milk Maid Ch. 02

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by C_frommn10/17/16

Great Start

One thing why not get a Little longer in the Chapters. Tell of her feelings seeing the other Milk Maids. How seeing them causes her to rethink her options.

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by findingmyway01/04/17

Backgound

I agree with the previous comment...it would also be help if you shared why she was selected...is this similar to how the others were selected? Info on the company would also help us understand the overall story

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