All Comments on 'The Nurse of His Dreams'

Very original! 5!!!

Superficial and rushed. I can feel no emotion from any of them and thus no reason to care about the characters. The sexual scenes were perfunctory. This seems to be an outline for a longer story.

with a previous commenter. Unoriginal and total rubbish, I doubt if any man would allow this type of disloyalty and humiliation from a wife let alone one where the marriage is 2 months old.

Wendy and Jane should punish him in the next chapter. He'll love it..

A good fantasy story, and well written. I like the way you build in erotic writing to the story. Maybe the sex could be a bit more explicit and erotic rather than just "she had massaged his prostate..."

Ignore the pathetic, sad sicko who writes more or less the same negative comment on every story.

A very slight story. Disappointing

Kinna a limp ending. Seems like u just wanted to be done

Husband divorces wife. The end.

In this story you can see nothing positive except idiotic contracts! The husband is an idiot who falls for the nurse at first sight and the wife is a whore! So what's left? Divorce! And a big chunk of money to pay to her husband.