All Comments on 'A Good Night at the Bar'

Well written, and highly erotic, even with the mis-spellings, and wrong word usage. Very enjoyable, and I can live with the surprise ending. Keep them cumming

Thank you for being kind about my errors. Ironically I have an editor who correctef them, but somehow I applied her edits to an older version of the document and then submitted something with errors. Sorry and I am glad you could enjoy the story in spite of them

Epitome is not the word you were looking for. It is Epiphany. Keep on trying.

After 12 years of marriage, my wife and had finally talked about how our sex life seemed to have lost 'something.'

She printed screen shots of this story and gave them to me with a big question mark across the page.

After we talked it over we spent a weekend at a resort 50 miles from home. She wore a blonde wig and it was wonderful. She drew the line at the anal stuff, but all in all it was magic. Thanks for the inspiration.

Lol! I knew it! Loved it!