All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 04'

This story keeps me guessing which is great. From reading ch.3, I thought Malik was the one who had attacked Narissa and got a position at the same place as her to attack again?and it?s Jake all along (at least I think so..there may be another twist). Anyway, I?ll be waiting with anticipation. :)

At first i didn't like the story but now i am totally drawn in to it . I love it . Keep up the good work !!! Keep me guessing !!!! :)

I have been reading the story of Mine from beginning til now I even submitted a comment earlier asking for more. When I show that you had finally written Ch. 04 I was as giddy as a school girl and sooo excited and you did it justice. I love this chapter too. More More More...Please More. This is the best story line I have read in a long while. :)

THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE EROTIC? LOOKS LIKE RAPE TO ME.

This great!! Jake gives me goose bumps, the good kind.

but i think that this sort of 'rape' is erotic

i would standardly have a hot guy dominate me like that..

I like the plot, but somehow I keep remembering Hannibal Lecter when Jake comes up...creepy

OH SHIT! THIS FUCKER IS C R A Z Y AS FUCKING HELL! WTF!

I know this dude is like crazy as fuck but I think i actually like him ; P I'm startin to think I truly am insane just a little.....

I Fing knew it!!!! Dude be C.R.A.Z.Y!!!!!

He's crazy but sexy as hell!

But he has this rough around-the-edge demeanor going on.

Ok I thought it was just me. Homeboy is batshit crazy & this poor girl is too clueless. Good stuff tho.

Cray Cray indeed, umm I'm sure the warning bells went off long before this

*Face palm* poor naive narissa when you get the chance you better chuck your shoes and take off running like a bat outta hell screaming for help.

I liked this story at first, but I'm not so sure I want to continue now. Only problem is, I'm too curious to stop.