Please don't let this be another cuck husband story, burn the bitch.
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Anonymous10/21/16
1*
more cuck shit.
by
Anonymous10/21/16
Haven't Even
Hey man- I haven't even read the third chapter yet, however-so glad you've posted. I continue to be amazed by the readers who select stories in the loving wives category, and then complain that it's a story about a cuckold. People, what's wrong with you?
...that we're all being played here. We're being led to believe that this wife is pulling a fast one on her husband, that she is having an affair (or affairs) behind his back, and that she is easing him into becoming a subservient cuck. Yet, I think -- and hope -- that this author is showing us one red herring after another.
It would be an interesting premise if it weren't for the wife's apparent dishonesty. Every husband's fantasy is for his wife to become the sex-crazed nymphomaniac he married, greet him at the door topless with a cold beer, give spontaneous blowjobs without request, etc., etc.. The question is: what would you be willing to sacrifice to make that happen? If you could vastly improve your sex life, strengthen your marital bond, and re-experience the fun and excitement you shared when you first met, what would you be willing to pay for all of that?
I really do hope this author is the red herring specialist I believe he may be.
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Anonymous10/21/16
Still Unresolved
As a couple in a cuckold marriage, what disturbed us about the first chapter was the apparent nonconsensual aspect of the husband's sudden "drunkeness" and his subsequent inability to perform on his anniversary, and the suspicious way a strange man was introduced to him. These elements have still not been resolved to our satisfaction. The husband suddenly speaking up about not crossing any serious sexual "lines" seems out of character, as he doesn't seem to dwell on any suspicions about why his sex life is much-improved, all of a sudden.
Marriage can be difficult enough, and when fetish behavior is introduced, it is obligatory that both spouses communicate honestly with each other about what they want to happen and set boundaries to protect their marriage. That is the only way for a cuckold marriage to not only survive, but thrive.
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Anonymous10/21/16
I don't get the negative comments.
Sofar there NIL evidence of any inpropriety by the wife, just pure suposition.
I am with swingerjoe here in that I hope it is a ruse by the author. I really hope they dont go go down the cuck route although they may up swapping and or wife sharing.
Who knows, I await the next instalment, but until then 4* for this offerring.
Dear Author, I hope you are going to make the 1* anon's eat their words
JJ
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Anonymous10/21/16
Where are you taking this story, chuck or ?
The way you set this up she is cheating on him. Drugging him on the anniversary. Get him to eat her cream pies. Funny tastes. Etc now is he that dumb not to know something me thing is written wrong. Plus your writing one page is to short.
I realize that stories are submitted several days before publishing and if you submitted a bunch of one pagers you can't change that.
But the one page format gets BORING very quickly especially if there is nothing to distinguish the story from others like it. Time to up your game!
As for the anons and others that question the complaints most authors are looking for feedback. A complaint like the above is valid if they want to improve. If not.........?
If the author isn't submitting larger portions in response to the complaints it's time to ditch him/her.
The allusion to illicit behavior on the wife's part is delicious tension, but when are we moving to some resolution? When do we find out what she is up to and what she did the night she got hubby drunk/drugged and left a foul taste in his mouth?
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Anonymous10/21/16
Waiting for the shoe to drop
He's a cuckold and can't figure it out. She's drugged him while he was drinking so she could play. Not only does he need to dump her, she needs to go to jail.
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Anonymous10/21/16
A common trope...
It is common in stories of this type, ie: first person accounts, for the man to say something like, "I'm no stud horse, but I have a respectable..." and then quote some outlandish number that would put his penis in the top 1% for size. Hackneyed is the word for this, I think. Also, it is "she and Bill", not "her and Bill" in this usage. Author, keep at it. You've got a potentially good tale going here. Plus, the BTB boys are riled up, so that's not all bad.
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Anonymous10/24/16
when?
So when does she tell him she has been cheating on him with Jason? or does Jason just move in with them? or does he figure out the funny taste he gets is Jason leaving him a reminder?
Did the author hit a snag? Waiting to find out how this goes. Did the wife cheat? Was hubby drugged or does he not hold his spirits as well as he thinks? Is this marriage getting spiced by Jason or poisoned? Inquiring minds want to know!
Fairly tame installment in otherwise decent series
The story is what it is - it's not for BTBers , why do the ones from that tribe who comment approach this as mandatory reading, or God forbid ...write their own stories instead of whining?
English
Another cuck
Please don't let this be another cuck husband story, burn the bitch.
1*
more cuck shit.
Haven't Even
Hey man- I haven't even read the third chapter yet, however-so glad you've posted. I continue to be amazed by the readers who select stories in the loving wives category, and then complain that it's a story about a cuckold. People, what's wrong with you?
I can't help but think...
...that we're all being played here. We're being led to believe that this wife is pulling a fast one on her husband, that she is having an affair (or affairs) behind his back, and that she is easing him into becoming a subservient cuck. Yet, I think -- and hope -- that this author is showing us one red herring after another.
It would be an interesting premise if it weren't for the wife's apparent dishonesty. Every husband's fantasy is for his wife to become the sex-crazed nymphomaniac he married, greet him at the door topless with a cold beer, give spontaneous blowjobs without request, etc., etc.. The question is: what would you be willing to sacrifice to make that happen? If you could vastly improve your sex life, strengthen your marital bond, and re-experience the fun and excitement you shared when you first met, what would you be willing to pay for all of that?
I really do hope this author is the red herring specialist I believe he may be.
Still Unresolved
As a couple in a cuckold marriage, what disturbed us about the first chapter was the apparent nonconsensual aspect of the husband's sudden "drunkeness" and his subsequent inability to perform on his anniversary, and the suspicious way a strange man was introduced to him. These elements have still not been resolved to our satisfaction. The husband suddenly speaking up about not crossing any serious sexual "lines" seems out of character, as he doesn't seem to dwell on any suspicions about why his sex life is much-improved, all of a sudden.
Marriage can be difficult enough, and when fetish behavior is introduced, it is obligatory that both spouses communicate honestly with each other about what they want to happen and set boundaries to protect their marriage. That is the only way for a cuckold marriage to not only survive, but thrive.
I don't get the negative comments.
Sofar there NIL evidence of any inpropriety by the wife, just pure suposition.
I am with swingerjoe here in that I hope it is a ruse by the author. I really hope they dont go go down the cuck route although they may up swapping and or wife sharing.
Who knows, I await the next instalment, but until then 4* for this offerring.
Dear Author, I hope you are going to make the 1* anon's eat their words
JJ
Where are you taking this story, chuck or ?
The way you set this up she is cheating on him. Drugging him on the anniversary. Get him to eat her cream pies. Funny tastes. Etc now is he that dumb not to know something me thing is written wrong. Plus your writing one page is to short.
OK
I realize that stories are submitted several days before publishing and if you submitted a bunch of one pagers you can't change that.
But the one page format gets BORING very quickly especially if there is nothing to distinguish the story from others like it. Time to up your game!
As for the anons and others that question the complaints most authors are looking for feedback. A complaint like the above is valid if they want to improve. If not.........?
If the author isn't submitting larger portions in response to the complaints it's time to ditch him/her.
Story coming out in dribbles and bits
The allusion to illicit behavior on the wife's part is delicious tension, but when are we moving to some resolution? When do we find out what she is up to and what she did the night she got hubby drunk/drugged and left a foul taste in his mouth?
Waiting for the shoe to drop
He's a cuckold and can't figure it out. She's drugged him while he was drinking so she could play. Not only does he need to dump her, she needs to go to jail.
A common trope...
It is common in stories of this type, ie: first person accounts, for the man to say something like, "I'm no stud horse, but I have a respectable..." and then quote some outlandish number that would put his penis in the top 1% for size. Hackneyed is the word for this, I think. Also, it is "she and Bill", not "her and Bill" in this usage. Author, keep at it. You've got a potentially good tale going here. Plus, the BTB boys are riled up, so that's not all bad.
when?
So when does she tell him she has been cheating on him with Jason? or does Jason just move in with them? or does he figure out the funny taste he gets is Jason leaving him a reminder?
SSDS
Roadblock?
Did the author hit a snag? Waiting to find out how this goes. Did the wife cheat? Was hubby drugged or does he not hold his spirits as well as he thinks? Is this marriage getting spiced by Jason or poisoned? Inquiring minds want to know!
Fairly tame installment in otherwise decent series
The story is what it is - it's not for BTBers , why do the ones from that tribe who comment approach this as mandatory reading, or God forbid ...write their own stories instead of whining?
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