Steph Didn't Want That

Congratulations...

...on what is quite possibly the most unreadable piece of shit on here. It gave me a headache just trying to slog through it. My suggestion is go back to your high school teachers and get your money back, as they didn't do their job right. Or, in the event you were home-schooled, go back to getting pegged by your dad and enjoy that reach-around. Epic fail!!!

Not as bad

This isnt a great story, but it's better than others I've read. You have complete sentences, and correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar.

Horah! Bravo! Encore! Standing ovation from me for that exit, although a bit long on the monologue for reality, but if you can run fast, why not? (And yes, skeptics - it's possible. I've seen some hefty girls run helluva fast.).

You had me angry, horny and feeling vindicated all on this one page! Oh boy. I loved it when they started getting bitchy after she reminded them of the age-difference. Also when she assumed the job of spraypainter and flooded Tom's pie-hole. Nicking the t-shirt was a fabulous touch.

And here comes the flack: whaddayamean rotund girls aren't dude-magnets? I've lost more than a few adorable dick-transporters to my softer sisters and I'm hot (vanity - why the hell not - it's fun). And those boys still greet me as if they can't really see me. It's just "Hi, have you seen so-and-so...". (Thanx a lot, you abandoning pricks!) Okay, rapid fire burst over.

Thanx for great story!
Ps thanks for the 4-way. Oh, thank you. Oh boy...

Thanks...

Thanks for the feedback and the people who favorited the story.

Hahaha

Loved it

What the hell did I just read?