All Comments on 'The October House'

Lovely story.

Like several of your stories I have read.

Thank you for sharing them with us,.

Please introduce the characters when they first appear. I had no idea who Mrs Bradford was except her grandchildren visited the house for some reason. At least these strangers had fun. Oliver must be buried on the property I guess as he has a plaque, but who is he and why would you bury your cat next to him? Even though the cat is not yet dead and you are planning said cat's funeral. The person thinking must be a boy scout and thus is always prepared...LOL.

Thank you, jfremont, for authoring a real romance story in the Romance category. It seems too many authors lately don't know what romance is. You do.

Really a very romantic and nice story to read. Perfectly expressed in my opinion.

It has really delighted me.

I would like the author to write a sequel to this story, as they marry, his life at October House, children, etc.

I think this story deserves.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

Feels like a story only half finished. A part two would be nice.

Great writing.

A pleasing little romantic story. The rather sweet idea that sexual intercourse moves you from boy or girl to man or woman. I did like the cat!

Great story, well written. "GforGraham" must have severe trouble understanding what he reads.